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Tense[]

Currently (only an example; tense is a problem throughout the entire wiki):

"...the fledgling and their sire is brought to be executed in front of a theater full of L.A.'s most powerful and influential Kindred. He executed the sire but he was forced by an intervention..."

Should be either:

"the fledgling and their sire were brought to be executed in front of a theater full of L.A.'s most powerful and influential Kindred. He executed the sire but he was forced by an intervention..."

or

"the fledgling and their sire is brought to be executed in front of a theater full of L.A.'s most powerful and influential Kindred. He executes the sire but he is forced by an intervention..."

For the game events, I favor present tense; it gives a sense of immediacy and fits better with a storytelling game. However, note that for events that precede the events of the game, the choice is less optional; the argument that we are discussing the events of a game, so we should present events in present tense, disappears. VvAnarchangelvV (talk) 22:48, January 6, 2016 (UTC)

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